I didn't see this game before it was blammed, but a suggestion based off your other 2 games: Try to make the drawings a bit more detailed and try to use different fonts. The stuff I'm working on at the moment I redrew basically everything like, 3 times and each time I made everything a bit more detailed and the lines a bit thinner, and it looks tons better now. Just an idea. Contact me if you want some drawing tips or something of the sort.
Abracadabra123
What a bummer. Your game is blammed. It looks interesting. It's better to finosh your game than release demos.
TheGamer3000 (Updated )
i made it just to show how the system will work
I guess I'll be making another demo when it's 80% done